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Simple Thoughts.... Complex Thinking..... In Search For An Answer

~* Monday, May 09, 2005 *~

 
Flicking the lighter
The sucking of the filter
Like setting tar on fire

Taking a breath of it
Filling my lungs up to the tip
Sending me up on a high

My senses are like
That of a bike
Speeding by

A moment of thrill
Just like a ride
I took in my life

Huff and Puff
The cigarette choke like tuff
As it burned away is a rush

Now left with a bitter
A bitter aftertaste
That last….

By Madeleine Wan

This bitter aftertaste is about the difficult times i have been through.. for the many lessons i have learnt though my own experience. It is over but it will stay with me all my life.. Well, i seem to be better at sad poems.... cos it is from our most painful past that we learn the most i guess.

1 Comments:

At 2:10 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Ehh.. im the smoker here wor.. But not much bitter aftertaste leh.. But difficult times makes one stronger.. Like a quote i remember.. "People are like teabags. You have to put them in hot water before you can know how strong they are"

 

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